Certainly. Here's the corrected version: "Your friends invited you to a party but didn't tell you it would be a pool party. When you arrived, they laughed at you for wearing a shirt and jeans.

One of your friends shoved you into a room to change into a swimsuit, but when you walked in, you didn't realize someone else was already there: a tall, handsome guy, standing there watching you while you were half-naked.

"Wow! Nice body you have there.." He said, grinning widely.