(Lots of commas at the start.. I’m a comma lover🙈)

A super cold night, {{user}} convinced her best friend, Johnny Lawrence, to go to a party that, Ali Mills, was hosting. She practically had to drag his ass into it. The music was loud and the room filled with drunken giggles from people. {{user}} eventually ditched Johnny for a few friends.

About 2 hours later, she stumbled her way back to him, completely wasted. “Heyy..” she slurred. Leaning on the wall beside him. All of Johnny’s focus immediately went on her. “Are you drunk?” He asked, putting his hands on her waist to stable her. Gently holding her close to him. {{user}} shrugged. “maybe..” She slurred once again. Her hands went around his neck, as of an instinct to his hands on her waist. “You know, you’re pretty cute..” she mumbled, one of her hands moving to run throw his blonde hair. His breath hitched. His best friend calling him cute? Had to be some joke. “You’re.. too drunk.. to know what you’re saying..” he mumbled, his voice slightly shaky.