*During 12 years of marriage, he has always been cold or rude to you even though you are his wife, He did that because he had trust issues with you because his past, he even controls your spending tightly and doesn't trust you at all until there is a time when you accidentally faint and you knowing that you have liver cancer, you never dared to tell him because you were afraid, you could only take cheap painkillers because you didn't want to be considered to be stealing his property.
Tonight, he was angry because his client belittled him during dinner earlier, while you were already asleep. But in the midst of Louis' raging anger, he suddenly took out his anger on you. You were sleeping in bed and suddenly your neck was grabbed by Louris and thrown against the wall. You woke up in a state of confusion and pain, but before you could say anything, he had already hit you in the chest and stomach, causing you pain and even your pain to relapse, He left you lying on the floor and left.
Shortly after he left, the pain continued to attack you, you vomited blood continuously and in pain, realizing that the chances of you being helped were slim, you put some of your clothes together and wear clothes that you think are good, the rope made of cloth is strong enough to hang oneself. You wear your best clothes because you don't want Louris to bother taking care of your comfort but you keep vomiting blood until your clothes are stained with blood again.
Not long after, Louris realized his mistake, what made him angry was his client, not you, so he rushed back to his room but when he opened the door, tears rolled down his cheeks when he saw you, already hanging unconscious with lots of blood from your mouth, when he tried to lower you he felt your hand was still warm, and your pulse is still there, which means you haven't been hanging for long, he quickly grabs his car keys to take you to the hospital on the nightstand but he sees painkillers scattered on the floor*
Absolutely. Here is a powerful and emotionally intense dialogue scene based on your story — focusing on the moment after Louris finds her hanging but still alive, filled with regret, guilt, and desperation.
Scene: Louris rushes into the bedroom.
(He bursts through the door, expecting anger, but instead he freezes. The sight hits him like a truck — she’s hanging, blood dripping from her mouth, her dress stained. Time stops. Then it all comes crashing in.)
Louris: (choking) “No—No! What the hell did you do?! HANUEL!!”
(He sprints over, trembling hands lifting her body, frantically trying to loosen the knot.)
Louris: “Don’t do this. Don’t you dare die on me! Please… Please, God—her hand’s still warm. Come on, stay with me…!”
(He lowers her carefully to the floor. Her pulse is weak but there. He starts crying, really crying, for the first time in years.)
Louris: “I was angry… not at you… I—I didn’t mean to hit you. I didn’t mean to walk out. I didn’t even ask if you were okay… What have I done?”
(He sees the painkillers spilled on the floor. Realization sets in.)
Louris: (whispers) “You were in pain… and I never asked why. I called you a thief when you were saving every cent to hide your sickness… from me.”
(He lifts her carefully into his arms.)
Louris: “Don’t die. Don’t leave me now, please. I’ll fix this—I’ll fix everything. Just… stay alive.”
Later, in the hospital, after surgery:
(She’s breathing. Alive. Hooked to machines. Louris is by her side, holding her bruised hand gently.)
Louris: “I hated you because I was afraid of loving someone again… but you—you loved me anyway. Silently. Gently. You never asked for anything, even while you were dying.”
(He lowers his forehead to her hand.)
Louris: “If you wake up… I swear, I’ll never raise my voice again. I’ll never raise my hand again. I’ll never let you feel unloved… even for a second.”