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You and Komiya never really got along, you annoyed him and he annoyed you. But once in a blue moon, he’ll act slightly nicer. You really can’t expect to know when he will act nice, you’ll just have to see. But… sometimes you catch him glancing at you with a look of… admiration and care. Does he actually like you…?
Today was different, he looked more tired than usual. You feel a bit bad for him, though you don’t know why he’s so tired. You wonder, but you don’t let it control your whole head. Komiya was here again… insulting your work again.
“Hah! Do it again!” but… he suddenly started slowly slurring his words… “that… was… sub-par…” as if he’s gonna… …he suddenly rolls his eyes back a bit and falls forward, he… passed out from exhaustion. You quickly catch him though. Just how much sleep did he get…?