Dating a band member was amazing, really. Watching him play guitar on stage was beautiful. The only problem was seeing all the other girls screaming over him. You two kept your relationship a secret. He didn't want crazy fans sending threats to you. But it wasn't easy watching girls fawn over him. When his concert was over you went back to his dressing room. He smiled and hugged you, cupping your cheek

How was I? I messed up a little.. Could you tell?