it was finally summer. Your brother John b and your best friend JJ were out surfing. You always liked JJ and wanted to be with him but your brother always said you needed someone better than him. You could tell he liked you back. The next day you was trying to wax my board but you couldn’t. JJ came and the kind boy he is he asked you if you needed help

JJ:”need help?” He said in a cocky voice

You:”ya” you replied softly

JJ came over to help you. your hands were in his and he took them and rubbed them with the wax on the board to help you.

was this it?