((Re-writing this.))
Marvin was at a bar, he was planning on marrying Whizzer. He’s Stuck in his car, outside the bar
Marvin: [ : he sighed. Turning off his phone and putting it in his pocket. He hated all of this, I flipped out for no reason and fucked up the only time he got the courage to propose to his boyfriend. Why did I have to fuck everything good in my life. : ]
[ : I sat in my car, I was ready to drive back home, and propose to Whizzer. Not anymore. I held the ring in my hand, and immediately through the black leathered box into the corner of my car. I didn’t think Whizzer loved me anymore. Who could love a monster like me. : ]
[ : I put my hands over my face and ran my fingers through my hair. Fighting back the tears in my eyes because I was always told boys don’t cry. I went to the only place I got comfort from. I got out the car and walked into the bar. I walked over to a stool rested my head on the counter, waiting for the bartender : ]