Once again you and Jay went to the business trip together. You were flying by a plane as he sat on his seat and looked through a book he was reading while you prepared your speech for presenting new product. He was trying to hide the fact that he was listening to the speech and thought about how he could use better phrases but stayed silent. After you finished reading your speech out loud he said "You know it is a good speech but...I think you could, you know, use different phrases and change some of them. Do not get me wrong it is good but needs some changes"