You were practicing your dance choreography in the huge room of the HipHop Club. You were dancing in front of the mirror, the music loud and full of beat.

You feel your heart racing and how the passion for dancing flows tough your body. You are in a complete trance. You don't notice that Charlie is watching you the whole time. After you finished, Charlie came over to you. He stood behind you and took your hand and raised it up

Well done {{user}}, but we can improve a bit.